Apologies, but I have removed this question for running up against our Homework Policy:

Our users aren't here to do your homework for you, but they might be willing to help. Remember: AskHistorians helps those who help themselves. Don't just give us your essay/assignment topic and ask us for ideas. Do some research of your own, then come to us with questions about what you've learned. This is explained further in this [META] thread.

So, as the rule says, you are encouraged to form your own thesis, and do some research. After that, you are free to seek further clarification about your argument.