I would certainly cross post this to /r/AskAnthropology! This is more in their wheelhouse for certain.

This is not a question and has been removed. /r/AskHistorians is not here to fact check broad, shallow overviews of human evolution and history. Additionally, most what is presented here falls outside the discipline of history. Consider taking specific questions to /r/askanthropology for information on prehistory and human evolution. If you have specific questions about history they may be asked here. Again though, neither of those two communities are for feedback and opinion on personally held stances on human history and evolution. Questions on /r/askhistorians should be clear, specific, and novel.