Hi there! Your question doesn't break any rules, and we're happy to let it stand. However, be warned that questions that boil down to "fact check X for me" rarely get satisfactory answers. Critiquing entire books is a lot of work, and people are rarely willing to read something just so that they can respond to a question on Reddit. It is often more effective to ask more targeted questions that can be answered directly - you are welcome to make more than one post if you need to.